Dear, Mr. Cordes
Thank you so much for the new mobile lab. We really needed them so much. We know it was a lot of money but, we really needed them. I guess that movie thing really worked or helped. Now all the keys are all there! I'm really really happy now because all the keys are all on. Thanks again.
By: Dakotah Peterson / Shulte
Friday, February 25, 2011
Thursday, February 24, 2011
Dara Lynn
I guess you could say Dara Lynn is scared of snakes. One day Marty was going up the hill and Dara Lynn was following him. She asked where are you going. Marty said " oh, there is a snake up the hill I am trying to get. So then Dara Lynn was retracing her steps so she wouldn't step on it.
A few days later Dara Lynn catches Marty go up the hill again. She asked did you catch that snake yet? Marty says no it acually hatched some. So Dara Lynn says, " well you go and chop thier heads off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A few days later Dara Lynn catches Marty go up the hill again. She asked did you catch that snake yet? Marty says no it acually hatched some. So Dara Lynn says, " well you go and chop thier heads off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wednesday, February 23, 2011
Judd Travers
Judd Travers is a person you just don't want to be a round. He abuses his dogs like they are dolls. He says bad words. He thinks the spot light is always on him. But its not always on him. He can focus on other people besides him, he just chooses not to.
Marty, character profile
Marty is a little boy about 11, years old. he loves animals. He tells lots of lies. One day he found a dog [type: Beagle]. He can't take it home with him because his family is kind of poor. They can't aford to take it to the vet or buy food for it. A couple days later he finds that dog again. So he can't help himself. He just takes the dog up the hill and hides it.
Friday, February 18, 2011
Chapters1-7
Chapter 1
In chapter 1, Marty is having a dinner and he is complaining that their is bullets in the rabbit that his dad shot. Marty goes up the hill with his 22. rifle and sees what he can shoot. Before he comes down he finds this dog roaming around. When he walks home he shows his parents, but they say he can't keep him. They predict it's Judd Traver's dog because they said that Judd just got a new haunting dog. So before they leave Marty names the dog Shiloh.
Chapter 2
In chapter 2, Shiloh ran away from Judd and Marty found him so Marty kept him. Now Marty takes some of his breakfast, lunch, and dinner and gives it to Shiloh So he's always starving.
Chapter 3
In chapter 3, Marty is starting this thing that he's going to start picking up bottles for money. His dad asked if Marty wanted to go deliver mail with him. So Marty just said fine theirs nothing to do anyway. So he just goes since theirs nothing to do.
Chapter 4
In chapter 4, Marty goes up the hill and tells his family he's going to go and shoot stuff up there but he's really going to feed Shiloh. Before he comes down he hears Judd's pickup pull up in the drive way. When Judd gets out he asked " if Marty's dad has seen his dog yet ". Marty's dad says no. Then he asked if Marty saw it. He said no.
Chapter 5
In chapter 5, Marty is still collecting cans. Marty's dad was planing on having David Howard [ Marty's friend ] over. Judd's dog is still there.
Chapter 6
In chapter 6, Marty goes up the hill again to feed Shiloh. When Dara Lynn [ Marty's sister ] sees him. She asked where are you going. Marty said there's a snake up there so he's going up there to kill it.
Chapter 7
In chapter 7, Marty goes to David Howard's house to have lunch. When he gets there he doesn't want to tell David that he has Shiloh. When they eat Marty eats like a pig. David's mom asks do you want some cookies to take with you. Or I have a another half sandwich for ya. So he takes everything she offers him. He was thinking to his self, my mom would kill me if i acted like this if she where here.
In chapter 1, Marty is having a dinner and he is complaining that their is bullets in the rabbit that his dad shot. Marty goes up the hill with his 22. rifle and sees what he can shoot. Before he comes down he finds this dog roaming around. When he walks home he shows his parents, but they say he can't keep him. They predict it's Judd Traver's dog because they said that Judd just got a new haunting dog. So before they leave Marty names the dog Shiloh.
Chapter 2
In chapter 2, Shiloh ran away from Judd and Marty found him so Marty kept him. Now Marty takes some of his breakfast, lunch, and dinner and gives it to Shiloh So he's always starving.
Chapter 3
In chapter 3, Marty is starting this thing that he's going to start picking up bottles for money. His dad asked if Marty wanted to go deliver mail with him. So Marty just said fine theirs nothing to do anyway. So he just goes since theirs nothing to do.
Chapter 4
In chapter 4, Marty goes up the hill and tells his family he's going to go and shoot stuff up there but he's really going to feed Shiloh. Before he comes down he hears Judd's pickup pull up in the drive way. When Judd gets out he asked " if Marty's dad has seen his dog yet ". Marty's dad says no. Then he asked if Marty saw it. He said no.
Chapter 5
In chapter 5, Marty is still collecting cans. Marty's dad was planing on having David Howard [ Marty's friend ] over. Judd's dog is still there.
Chapter 6
In chapter 6, Marty goes up the hill again to feed Shiloh. When Dara Lynn [ Marty's sister ] sees him. She asked where are you going. Marty said there's a snake up there so he's going up there to kill it.
Chapter 7
In chapter 7, Marty goes to David Howard's house to have lunch. When he gets there he doesn't want to tell David that he has Shiloh. When they eat Marty eats like a pig. David's mom asks do you want some cookies to take with you. Or I have a another half sandwich for ya. So he takes everything she offers him. He was thinking to his self, my mom would kill me if i acted like this if she where here.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
Shiloh Prediction
I think that this story is going to be about a little boy, and his dog. I think his dog is going to die. Maybe this kid only spent like one month with him. Or, maybe he has lived with him for a very long time now. I think that the dog will have a heart attack. Or maybe the kid gave him something that he was not supposed to. Well that's my prediction.
Friday, February 4, 2011
Chapters 16-17
Chapter 16
In chapter 16, Calender turned Alaster in to lead, which she wasn't to do. She did it anyway though. After that William breathed on all the lead people. When he breathed on Sir Simon. Sir Simon couldn't believe that William had made it that far. After William breathed on all them they had a picnic.
Chapter 17
In chapter 17, William had to go back. The next day when he got back Mrs. Phillips and him had a picnic. After the picnic they go up stairs to the castle, and Mrs. Phillips had a surprise for him. When William goes in something scared him. What it was, was it was ALASTER! William was about to pick it up, but Mrs. Phillips said NO! If you pick it up he could come alive. You have the power to make people come to life if they're lead.
THE END!
In chapter 16, Calender turned Alaster in to lead, which she wasn't to do. She did it anyway though. After that William breathed on all the lead people. When he breathed on Sir Simon. Sir Simon couldn't believe that William had made it that far. After William breathed on all them they had a picnic.
Chapter 17
In chapter 17, William had to go back. The next day when he got back Mrs. Phillips and him had a picnic. After the picnic they go up stairs to the castle, and Mrs. Phillips had a surprise for him. When William goes in something scared him. What it was, was it was ALASTER! William was about to pick it up, but Mrs. Phillips said NO! If you pick it up he could come alive. You have the power to make people come to life if they're lead.
THE END!
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